Thanks a bunch for the updated manual! :thumbup:
Now, this is not complaining, but I have compiled a "nitpicking list" (I would do all of this, but after 2 attempts at installing TeX editors, I've given up on that format... :compbash
page 4
> The spacecraft3 reference is not needed.
> Should mention the need to activate/enable CRTMFD.
> I know it probably doesn't look good, and it might not make sense, but could the URLs be shown? If the document is printed there's no way to know the link.
> About the lines to be added, the readme file (SSU Readme First.txt) mentions a few more... who's wrong?
page 8/9
> Is it possible to put the 2 images in the same page? Maybe by cropping some white space off the edges of the images?
page 10
> RMS grapple/release keys don't work here, but key 8 works.
page 11
> In the ascent phase: "MECO is commanded" should be replaced by "A manual MECO is commanded".
> At the top of the 2 column: "The table below" should be "Table 2", and maybe with a link to it?
page 13
> The image description should say something like "attachment locations on the Orbiter with (right) and without (left) ODS".
> About the text below the image: aren't bridgerails shown now? We just don't have the horn-like "guide things", right?
page 16
> At the end of the text: shouldn't the OMS/MPS etc, have a chapter for them? Something like "MEDS displays", after the DPS displays. If so, please inform so I can give a hand in the writing.
page 17
> Should add the phrase "Currently no item entries are supported" to the ENTRY TRAJ chapter.
> Correction to the HORIZ SIT chapter: "Only ITEMs 41, 3, 4, 6, 8 and 39 are supported. ITEM 41 selects the landing site, ITEMs 3 and 4 switch between the primary and secondary runway (not necessarily the same physical runway), ITEM 6 switches between a straight-in and overhead approach, ITEM 8 switches the aim point between nominal and close, and ITEM 39 switches between nominal, short and ELS (Emergency Landing Site) speedbrake configurations for final approach. These parameters all affect the entry autopilot, so they should be set as early as possible, preferably before Entry Interface (EI)."
page 18
> The table is outdated, "Landing Sites currently available in SSU" file has current list.
general
> There should be one (or more) empty lines after the TOCs.
> Question: the "Version 1.XX Rev. B" refers to the manual or the SSU "code"?